Student: José Antônio

Teacher: Beatriz

School: Winners

Stage: Advanced

 Choose one of the topic sentences above in brainstorm supporting ideas. Then choose at least four supporting statements and write a paragraph.

One of my best friends is my cousin because every time I go to his house, he always stand up to greet me. He and I often go to some parties together for fun and flirtatious dance with some girls. My cousin until he can be cool but he is very vain, I do not bother with that and accept that it is so. Once I, my cousin and his girlfriend went to a nightclub. Everything seemed quiet when a perverted flirted with girlfriend of my cousin, he became very rebellious and wanted to confront the perverted, started fighting and I had to break up the fight between the two, because if they continued, would be arrested by police.

Student: José Antônio

Teacher: Beatriz

School: Winners

Stage: Advanced

 Choose one of the topic sentences above in brainstorm supporting ideas. Then choose at least four supporting statements and write a paragraph.

In general, my friends tend to be a little dependent. There are times that they need to come to some place, they ever call  me or other friend asking if I want to go.  I think that sometimes they would be fewer dependents and more independents. But one positive point about when we go to some place together is that when we go buy something in some place, they are always amenable, they always accept what we buy and they are always giving some tips about what buy.

Student: Maiara Bezerra

Teacher: Beatriz

School: Winners

Stage: Advanced

 

  Choose one of the topic sentences above in brainstorm supporting ideas. THen choose at least four supporting statements and write a paragraph.

 

One of my best friends is crazy for cellphone. She don't get be without one. While I and my others friends use cellphone to 

call someone or to send a message to them, she use it to all the things: listen a lot of music (she stay with the headphones all the 

time);to surf the internet and mainly to take many photos in different places. Unlike me and my others friends, she love to visit and to participate of relationship sites like Facebook, Myspace, twitter, orkut, msn, inside others. I think that these sites are a little dangerous.I think that she has a little problem and it should be treated. I already tried to talk with her about these attitudes, but she said that all these things are passing and she is young and has to enjoy life.