Student: Maiara Bezerra

Teacher: Beatriz

School: Winners

Stage: Advanced

 

  Choose one of the topic sentences above in brainstorm supporting ideas. THen choose at least four supporting statements and write a paragraph.

 

One of my best friends is crazy for cellphone. She don't get be without one. While I and my others friends use cellphone to 

call someone or to send a message to them, she use it to all the things: listen a lot of music (she stay with the headphones all the 

time);to surf the internet and mainly to take many photos in different places. Unlike me and my others friends, she love to visit and to participate of relationship sites like Facebook, Myspace, twitter, orkut, msn, inside others. I think that these sites are a little dangerous.I think that she has a little problem and it should be treated. I already tried to talk with her about these attitudes, but she said that all these things are passing and she is young and has to enjoy life.